Translate #11
No intro for this blog post... wish i had a freebie..... #1: Translation 1 places emphasis on the imagery of the uneasy dream that Samsa had. The use of the word giant also adds emphasis to this imagery. In the translation it says "to find himself" which suggest that Samsa was unaware of this change in physical appearance. The arrangement of the sentence in my opinion draws my attention directly to the dream. #2: Translation 2 is not nearly as effective in putting emphasis in the physical transformation of Samsa . "He found he had been transformed in his bed into an enormous bug." The first half of this sentence is ridiculous. Where else would he had been while dreaming? You normally dream IN YOUR BED. DUH. However, this translation use s the word enormous instead of giant. This decision could mean that the physical change was much more drastic than translation 1 would like to offer. The structure was more in the form of a build up, BOOM then a falling action k...